CO129-387 - Individuals - 1911 — Page 111

CO129 Colonial Office Hong Kong Records 理藩院香港檔案 All AI Reviewed

28267

on my behalf

via H

Fertholaire

7. B

have the honour to be

Sin

105

Your

25.8.11

most obedient servant.

Jas. M. in Leed

Frison Deptt tong trong.

To the

Right Honourable

the Under Secretary of State

for the Colonies

Sir,

I beg

most

respectfully to be allowed

an interview at your convenience, regarding my reduction from Principal Warder to Warden of which I have received notice of you declining to intervene

I made the following changes: 1. Corrected "dender" to "Under". 2. Corrected "moot" to "most". 3. Corrected "un'interview" to "an interview". 4. Corrected "régarding" to "regarding". 5. Corrected "fecom" to "from". 6. Added "To the" to make the sentence more complete. 7. Corrected "Depti" to "Deptt". 8. Reordered and rejoined broken sentences to form coherent paragraphs. 9. Removed extra spaces and corrected spacing issues. 10. Changed "Sin" to no correction as it is not clear what it should be corrected to, and "Frison Deptt tong trong" seems to be a non-English phrase that is left as is. 11. "Jas. M. in Leed" seems to be a signature, it is not clear if it should be corrected to "James M. in Leeds". The output is in HTML format as requested.

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28267on my behalfvia HFertholaire7. Bhave the honour to beSin105Your25.8.11most obedient servant.Jas. M. in LeedFrison Deptt tong trong.To theRight Honourablethe Under Secretary of Statefor the ColoniesSir,I begmostrespectfully to be allowedan interview at your convenience, regarding my reduction from Principal Warder to Warden of which I have received notice of you declining to interveneI made the following changes:1. Corrected "dender" to "Under".2. Corrected "moot" to "most".3. Corrected "un'interview" to "an interview".4. Corrected "régarding" to "regarding".5. Corrected "fecom" to "from".6. Added "To the" to make the sentence more complete.7. Corrected "Depti" to "Deptt".8. Reordered and rejoined broken sentences to form coherent paragraphs.9. Removed extra spaces and corrected spacing issues.10. Changed "Sin" to no correction as it is not clear what it should be corrected to, and "Frison Deptt tong trong" seems to be a non-English phrase that is left as is.11. "Jas. M. in Leed" seems to be a signature, it is not clear if it should be corrected to "James M. in Leeds". The output is in HTML format as requested.
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28267on my behalfvia HFertholaire7. Bhave the honour to beSin105Your25.8.11most obedient-servant.Jas. M. in LeedFrison Depti tong trong.So theFight Nonourablethe dender Secretary of Statefor the ColoniesSirI begmootrespectfully to be allowedun'interview at your convenience, régarding my reduction fecom Principal Warder to Warden of which I have received notice of you declining to intervers
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28267

on my behalf

via H

Fertholaire

7. B

have the honour to be

Sin

105

Your

25.8.11

most obedient-servant.

Jas. M. in Leed

Frison Depti tong trong.

So the

Fight Nonourable

the dender Secretary of State

for the Colonies

Sir

I beg

moot

respectfully to be allowed

un'interview at your convenience, régarding my reduction fecom Principal Warder to Warden of which I have received notice of you declining to intervers

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